by Razetiger
Love the story so far! Hope you continue to update it in the future!
The two sisters sound absolutely declious. I think the younger one has a big debt to pay to Gisela, I wonder how she'll go about saying thanks...
Raze you are soooo talented with words and have created such an interesting world! Love the characters you have created and can't wait to hear more of the adventures of Gisela and poor little Lucrezia!
It's about time we saw the real action. Cant't wait to see what else you have in stored for us. The suspense of seeing Gisela's fat ass getting completely ravaged is killing me!
The next installment of the story cannot come soon, enough.
I love this story, please continue it. It has so much potential and being the breast man that I am, I can't wait to see what perverted things happen to our main character's own set of milk melons.
A bit too repetitive in the description(s) of the protagonist. How many times do you truly need to tell your readers she has massive tits and a humongous ass?
The second chapter was a decided improvement over the first, but to end it where you did, and then abandon it? That is just weak. Would have been a five, instead of the one it got.
GeoD