All Comments on 'The Wages of Sin'

by LeCoach

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Send your story to a church bulletin!!!

Silly moralism. Waste of the reader's time unless they did not make it past the third gtade!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good until the end

The story was HOT, kind of sounds like a woman I know. I don't understand why you had to add the doom and gloom ending. Let it be a hot fantasy for everyone to enjoy and leave it at that/

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Interesting...

So, who is this "Lucy?"

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I began writing erotic stories in my early teens. I feel this is my calling. I try to write stories that are at least somewhat believable. I love women and don't like to see them victimized or brutalized. Yes, there are some typos and other mistakes in my stories. I'm not...