- Romance
- The Waitress
- Page 3
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Click hereCathy put her arm around her husband, "And you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoA good story but lots of missing pieces in the abrupt end!! Also, he wasn't sure if he was winning the Pullitzer while he was heading to NY for the new job so the letter Tim says something else
Anonymousover 2 years agoA real loving romance. What more could you want from life? So there's the odd error but the story telling more than makes up for it.
Anonymousover 5 years agoSchmaltzy, but nice.
You could do with a careful read-through before submitting, too. Several instances of missing words, eg: "Molly opened the just..."
IntrospectiveWandererover 5 years agoAuthorThis was a story that just popped into my head, got written, and submitted. I agree with the comments that I should have reviewed it little more thoroughly and perhaps have it more involved, a little longer. Thank you for your feedback and comments, they're always appreciated.
Anonymousover 5 years agoReally sweet and romantic, fits the category perfectly. Maybe you could make your stories longer. Enjoyed reading it.
