by Andyhm
Andyhm you are an outstanding writer and story teller! I cannot wait until you write another Colt story.
Best Wishes,
DOS
And it was worth the wait to get the 2nd chapter.
Thanks for your efforts.
Great story and great series! Looking forward to more chapters in the future!
Enthralling and very well written story. I'm glad that you gave us a hint at what happened to Billy in the end. I was afraid that you'd leave that as a cliffhanger.
Great story! You have captured our attention! Looking forward to more of these!
Wonderful story, what an adventure back into the old west. Cant wait for the rest of the story.
I hope your life on the water keeps your creative juices flowing. You have a major talent. Thanks.
La Grange, Chicken Ranch, brothel, and Zindler are all part of another story for another time and place. But I must commend you for being a remarkably well informed European to have made your tie-in to this story.
Man, I really like these first two chapters. I really hope you keep more coming. You are a natural for a second career.
I enjoyed this one even more
than the first chapter, even
though both are second reads.
Well done, Sir.
What an excellent format! this can go on for as long as the author wishes. A total and refreshing change from the normal fare. Most interesting. 5*s.
who were the would be thieves then? seems like he almost recognised one of them.
EXCELLNT, both arts. Old West, a little paranormal, good men and women doing the right things. Plus, I got to read about the Guns on the Internet and the Rifle company. Thanks.
Great story, lot of inaccurate terms used, but it was good for a Brit. They were called Texas Rangers. The Rangers first were commissioned in 1823 by Stephen Austin. Their primary role was to protect the frontier from Indian raids. They did this for $1.25 a day and provided their own provisions and mounts. The Walker Colt was the collaboration between Samuel Walker and Sam Colt. They were manufactured to specifications by Eli Whitney in Whitneyville Connecticut for Sam Colt in New York N.Y. in 1847, 1100 were produced. And if you're interested you can look up much more on the internet. It was a good work of fiction, but it could have used a little more research. Not bad for a non-Texan and a Brit to boot. 5-stars.
Enjoyed both stories, hopefully the pistol talks too you very soon. We need another one... Thanks... Don't worry about the inaccurate terms... You're telling from a brits perspective, of course he wouldn't know how to talk right... 😁
Both stories were great reads. I love a good western, and the going back in history to billy's time just added to the history. Five stars!