All Comments on 'The Walks Ch. 03'

The drop in quality - both of writing and imagination between Chapter 1 and this submission is so big it's hard to believe they were written by the same author. I thought I'd found a hidden gem when I stumbled across Chapter 1. How soon it degenerated into cliche.

I know I shouldn't mind. It is free after all. But when your hopes get raised and then dashed...

like that come from? Asking your wife to show as much as many do on the beach, does NOT constitute permission to make a public spectacle of herself.

Les will soon be jobless and Alice will be making porn to keep the roof over there heads. "What's to like about that?"

The only one who benefits from what has been going on during this week is Madeleine.

Alice will look back at the time she enjoyed the support of Les with regret that she chose to please Madeleine over her husband.