All Comments on 'The Walters Brothers'

It was a fun read with great chacters, both heros and villains. It explained the story of the Split Tail Ranch.

I have thoroughly enjoyed reading most all of your writing on Literotica. I keep reviewing your list to see if I missed one!

Thanks for sharing

Great story like always

Rubbish

Fantastic job! I enjoyed the characters, plot and writing. Mostly, you reminded me of my Grandfather. Gramps was a huge fan of Louis L'amour books – me, not so much. I know if I had handed this to my gramps, after reading it he would have had a huge grin on his face while saying, “son, you ain't old enough for readin' books like this.”... In any case, you brought back a lot of wonderful memories for me. Thank You!

An outstanding read, even the second time!

To anonymous from 4 days ago, why do you think it's rubbish? You are certainly entitled to your opinion, but you didn't eloborate as to why you feel that way.

Love the story, love the series.

This is the second reading for this sequel (or prequel) ... Just as thrilling as Split Trails .. Now I am waiting for the next Walters brothers saga. Thank you Q ... Please keep writing your stories.

Fantastic. And I prefer sci-fi but your western reel me right in.

Great read. How the US became the success it is. No woke winging prats, real people and taking responsibility for their actions. Loved it.

Yet another rivetting stoy from this author. 5*s

A gripping read. Enough said.

I have read many of you submissions and really enjoy your work but most of all I like the westerns "Slit Trails Ranch" and "The Walter Brothers". We look forward to the next instalment. Keep writing the westerns

I had to check when it was posted because I couldn't believe I'd missed it. Very well done and Yes, I'd encourage further stories about the brothers. Now I've got to go back and reread Split Trails Ranch.

Very well done...can't wait for the next chapter

5 stars (despite Elsa's death)

I consider this read one of the best on the site! Great job and look forward to reading more of your works!

Excellent story, the story line held my interest all the way.

Outstanding story. I thought it to be interesting and intriguing all the way to the end

You, my friend, have a gift. I believe that you should ensure your intellectual property is protected and start networking to find an agent to pitch your stories. They are every bit as captivating as Yellowstone and 1883.

Just made my favourite two stories into my favourite three stories:

1- Eye in the sky (bought the book on Amazon after reading it here)

2- Lady in Red (so over-the-top it's brilliant)

3- The Walters Brothers/Split Trails Ranch

Release them as one continuous story, you've got talent my friend.

Good Luck,

Tony

great looking for #3

Another fine read! Truly enjoying the story line.

Great addition to"Split Tail Ranch" . great story. Thanks for writing.

We all want a good ending but the death of Elsa overshadowed it but not in a totally macabre way. Absolutely excellent throughout. Thank you. 5⛤

A rippin' good yarn, champ. Keep 'em comin'!

Well written though killing off Elsa was mean! Another fine effort and we’ll worth the read, 5 stars!

Man, I do loves and appreciate your writing. I am honored that you share your talent and ability. Long after the story is read, many things and events still linger and I hope to remember much of this story for a very long time...!

Good story!

Jim

Great story. Can’t wait to read the continuing adventures in the next novel. Cheers

WOW!

Very good story until the last page where you lose it and refer to this and that daughter; we lose track of who they are, who they are with, etc. It is like you wanted to finish the story but did not give a darn about how it ended.

5* for most of it and 1* when you fuck up the last page

BJ

Just Exceptional. Thanks for the enjoyment.

Great story looking forward to the next instalment.

Enjoying your stories. Don’t remember which one I read first to find them. If I really like a story, I check out the author’s other stories and if I like the first couple I will start reading them from top to bottom. Needless to say I have found yours to be pretty good. Quality of stories damn close to a 10 for everyone I have read, keeping characters straight about an 8. But as I said very good reads.

This type of story suited the author way better than their cross dressing transvestite expositions with pan sexual group sex and oh of course free love 🤣🤣🤣

It's amazing the sins this author tries to paper over with the old LOVE WORD 😇😇 So in this story one which should be much bigger considering the amount of time and energy the author commits to their other pet projects ends up being short sweet and way to the point.

Oh well maybe the author will one day realize they should stick to what they know instead of reconciling with every slut wife on the Planet🤔🤔🤔

Wow ! Who knew you could write westerns ? But then you seem to be able to make all of your stories real & believable. A lot of violence in this one, but that was the old west. A lot of instant justice in those days. Harsh but effective. Loved the characters. Another easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊

I'm not much for westerns, but this was a wonderful story. Maybe I do like them now. A lot of sadness here, especially about Elsa, but I guess that's the kind of stuff that happened.

not into westans

Loved it...Please do more!

Very enjoyable tale.

Well written and developed.

Damn fine story! Please write some more westerns!

Had no idea what I was getting into....but you sucked me in and to me for a great ride...Thanks!

A tale even Zane Gray would envy!

Mike R.

Excellent and it joins Split Trails Ranch as a fun, excellent read. Also, Google search the guns mentioned here.

Fantastic

This story got me. I could not stop reading it 'til I was done. Thanks.

an incredibly violent male fantasy

One of the best read's on this site.

A very good read

An excellent read, thank you.

Fantastic story, hopefully it does continue!

2nd or 3td time reading this excellent story. thanks for sharing

I loved it. We need more zeke and brad. Please continue the series.

Excellent story. Sad about Elsa I liked her.

Thanks for your hard work. I thoroughly enjoyed it and appreciate you for it.

Mostly excellent. Unnecessarily bloody. (And it's "hanged" not "hung.")

one of my favorites reads on a slow day. I imagine this as a Western Movie,

Loved it! Great as always.

That was soooo good.

From the descriptions of vintage firearms, are you starting a new genre? “NRA porn” perhaps?

Lots of sex, shootin’, and explosions… of several kinds. It almost sounds Freudian come to thing about it.

About five bazillion rating on a scale of five. …on to da next.

Another Louis L’Amour type story with sex. 50 Shades of Louis L’ Amour!…

JT

I thought it was well written, and would like to see more written along the lines of this story, and about these times

Elsa's.

What a reading pleasure this was! A classic western tale,

it’s wonderful and captivating. My thanks to the author.

LOVED all the western stories!!! Please write more westerns.

You have a gift for story telling. Enjoyed your western as much as a Louis L’Amour novel.

Great story. Third time reading the series, may start over again. THANK YOU

A pity it wasent part of the main story as it would have given some context. Literotica wont let one change the story order by date to make following some stories easier to join up.

I've owned and read every L'Amour book (multiple times), this is every bit as good. Now on to Spilt Trail Ranch!Thank you Q.

somewhere east of Omaha

Just great. I am not a fan of westerns but you kept me coming back.

I enjoyed it very much. Thank you!

I enjoyed your story very much. I look forward to more Bradley tales!!

Well done on both of your stories I've read. Keep up the good works.

i loved it keep writing these stores

Every time I read some of your stories my 75 year old start leaking, as far as I'm concerned you do a better job the Louis L'Amour. Thanks for your style

It seems you have read a lot of older writers of western Loar & picked a few of their tricks up. These boys you write of could be "Sackett's" or "Chantry's" hell mebbe even "Killkenny"!! lol you write well & with a few/better proof reads you will turn error free work out! You turn a phrase well and pen an interesting & hard to put down read!

A very enjoyable 5 STAR read! Thanks for sharing! It seems you read Louis L'Amour books. :o) Your two brothers were very reminiscent of the Sacketts. I'm thinking Tell and Orin or maybe Tell and Tyrell. I hope you share some more stories. I'm thinking you might read some of Zane Grey too since he sometimes hobbles his horses but I don't recall L'Amour ever having written about that practice. In any event you created a wonderful story and THANK YOU!