All Comments on 'The Warlock & the Wizardess Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Enhanced story telling would be even better

The author introduces the chapter by saying that it is just a "silly parody" with some "fantasy cliches". It is a shame that he has not woven the existing material into a more in-depth fantasy adventure, because this chapter is very well-written.

Luvbug07Luvbug07almost 3 years ago

Great writing. I would've liked to see Uli get into Shay's pussy while Jad was still plugged deep in her ass. That would've been a truly memorable DP moment. But, maybe you're teasing us and we'll see that in a later installment. Keep up the good work.

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