All Comments on 'The Warlock Pt. 09'

This was the first chapter I wanted to 5-star. The others were less coherent, less explanatory, more of a stream of thoughts rather than a story. This one, maybe because of your editor, was a lot more solid and understandable. Loved it, eagerly waiting for the next one!

Me gusta.

TOO SHORT!

I would like to cast my vote for another April's Fool chapter. I would love to see it continue on to the honeymoon and beyond.

This story seems to be coming along nicely. I'm looking forward to more.

April's Fool could use some extension when you see fit to get around to it, also.

And thanks for the heads up on the effort to continue Path of the Necromancer. It's one of my top stories that I'm annoyed about it being abandoned. If the new work lives up to the original I will be thrilled.

Great Story! Can't wait for more!

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Love your sense of humor. Love the balance of plot advancement, "sexy time", character development, and action. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Cheers man,

Thanks so much for the shout out :D

JC

Title says it all

JC

This story just keeps geting better and looking forward to the next chapter. Love to read more of April fool as well

Thanks for all the work you do to give us all such good storys to read.

Looking forward for the next chapter.

This chapter leaves me wondering just how powerful is gwydion an chloe exactly we as readers haven't seen the full extent of there powers but with martin saying they are the two he is afraid of fighting the most it just begs the question of just how powerful are those two

are you planning on posting more?

the frequency has been increasing kind of exponentially...

Can't wait for next chapter.

You initially said that you will introduce a chapter every week, I know you have other things to take care but it's been more than a month. Plz we want a new chapter!

Love the story. Anxiously waiting for more.

Just got done reading what you've written, and I'd put it at a pretty good quality read, so thanks for the beginning of a series

I hope life is treating you well and that you will find time to satisfy all your waiting fans. Looking forward to the next chapter.

The story is awesome and maybe once you have enough of it and some help you should definitely look to putting it out on paper. Great job once again

This was a great chapter. It gave some real insight into their world and really progressed things along quite nicely. My only real possible complaint is that it might be too neat, but please don't listen to that. I have SO had enough of stories that take a small problem and turn it into this big ordeal that no matter how the MC goes at it it just goes on and on. Then it take an apocalyptic event to end something that should have been solved after a weekend of troubleshooting...I'm so done with that torturous drivel. If they need more conflict introduce a new problem or antagonist. GEEZE! It's like these guys can't let go of their first idea!

❤ Love Your Writing!!

DJ

BWAHAHAHAHA! Almost made me choke on breakfast, that's awesome.

I've been meaning to compliment you on your character relationships - esp as that's the heart of your story. The action is fun and the sex is ok, but the people are the reason I click "Next".

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They were all pictures of my two girlfriends naked... ...My favorite was probably the close up of both of their pussies that had the caption "Wish you were here."

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That's classic lol

You are really ramping up the plot lines, the background and the details of your magic system and the overall effect is that I'm really digging your story. I was "entertained" (3 or 4 stars) for the first few chapters, but lately this is Really Good Stuff - 5 Stars and a bag of chips ;)

Thanks for sharing your time and talent!

Jason