All Comments on 'The Warmth of Darkness'

She calls you up telling you she needs help. Then on the way up she is dressed for work and he was hoping for more. Why would he have different expectations? You mention an age difference as if it mattered. Yet you don't provide a context or how that may have affected their relationship- past or future.

Please use contractions- How often do people say 'did not' rather than 'didn't'. It would add to the flow of the story. There are too many sentences that simply don't advance the story- get rid of them to improve the flow.

Good effort, Needs editing.