All Comments on 'The Warped & Wicked Gym Coach Ch. 01'

I am looking forward to this. It is such a promising start. Well done!

I really like this set-up. It is well imagined, written and it the has potential to be a great cfnm story. Loking forward to more installments.

L O R

I like the setup and the pacing, very well done, please keep going.

Great story. Perhaps you could incorporate other female teachers into the storyline.

"But the mind is stronger than the body!" Well said, Ms Bandy. But I have the feeling that Jake is about to discover that some minds are stronger than others, and Ms Bandy's mind is stronger than Jake's.

However, it is fortunate that they are both God-fearing children of Christ. I'm sure neither of them would do anything naughty.

I'm liking this story. I picked it up from a favourable comment on Ch.2 in the Public Feedback Portal, and I'll now go on to read that chapter.

HermesMendoza, I note this is your first submission. I thought it was excellent, well written and very readable. Your biographical note is uninformative, which I think is a pity. I like to know a little more about good authors than you have yet told us. Maybe you could add a few points sometime?

Lue

Couldn't read passed the first page. Is this teacher some sort of hypocrite! She teased the poor boy and made it his fault he got a hard on. What a slut...

Superb story telling.

Looking forward to next Chapter.

WTF? Teacher is a total hypocrite. She is the reason he go an erection, and she tries to make him feel guilty?