All Comments on 'The Waste Land'

Good because:

The story is short, sharp with a good cliff hanger to finish. A good idea to test reader reaction before a 20 page effort.

The writing is of a good quality for this site.

You've written a story with some sex in it and not a lot of sex with a vague plot.

Recommendations.

Enjoy writing if this is your first stab.

Take your time and release when you're happy.

Don't be in rush to reveal 'why' for your cliff hanger. Take 20 chapters.

Get an editor with two things in mind. The editor just helps with YOUR story. Your editor should comment on what have not written as well as the stuff you have.

Good luck and have fun.

Holy fuck, dude... Or gal. I actually haven't looked at your profile to see, and don't plan too.

Surprise, you're dead. It's how I want to go, doing what I love.