by Pelaam
Sort of makes me feel all warm inside.A beautiful story thank you for sharing!
Pelaam, the story is fine and I have a hope to read some more of your tales. Nancy and Jack could suddenly appear as scary ghosts to punish nasty and mean people, in some office affair. I think Ghosts in the office - that would be hottt!!!
I am a sucker for romance and that was very sweetly written. I thought you did a terrific job with the attraction, tenderness and budding love. Well done and good luck in the contest!
This had a very familiar feel to it... I don't doubt the story's original (obviously), I'm just wondering if maybe you based your plot on a common legend or myth? It was well written, but held no surprises for me. I guess it wasn't supposed to, though... Just gave me the feel of deja vu, like I'd heard this story before (even if I'd not heard it told in just this way). Good luck to you in the contest.
Excellent story, i love the Jax role...and loved to replace his role by myself..