All Comments on 'The Water Meter Reader'

Nice story, but I don't think meter readers are certified in anyway. The lack of ddt has cost millions of third world people thier health and lives. One of the primary causes of death before Floriedaton was tooth decay, modern dentistry and floride saves more lives by a long way. A real issue not listed is estrogens and psydo estrogens sorry about the spelling in the water. They are not filtered by water systems and are maybe a source of many issues

Excellent story of sharing, truthfulness, communications and ... love. Thx.

5*

BJ

Sorry. You lost me in the first few paragraphs.

The story is wonderful other than the lies told about the harm done by fluoridated drinking water. All those alleged dangers have been disproved. A great number of children (and adults) have been harmed (both in terms of dental pain and cost) by NOT having fluoridated water.

Can't tell the sex of a child at one month.

The moment our 'hero' fucked a married woman. Little prick.

And plenty of real life pain to be shared by all -

The social price of being overweight in this time s far higher than many understand - there was a time when being overweight was a sign of affluence and power. Now it is considered to be in "bad taste", wasteful, irresponsible. Both are wrong - however nowadays we have ways to make people suffer for the things others do not like about them - ah well - people are just plain good by nature RIGT??? - bullshit.

Great story. It would be sweet to see some more like it.

One of the first stories I've fully read from start to finish! Keep up the amazing work.

Nice to see the little guy wins one for a change, instead of the overboard stuff that is usual, another good one DG well worth 5

so, this is how nice guys think, huh? i definitely got a sense of character - earnest, honest, kind, easy-going - and it was pretty endearing how he kept using and bringing up that one high school project. the writing style complemented the character, and was easy to read. but i thought the hottest part was when he was flashed and fucked by the housewives. romantic HEAs just don't do a lot for me ... but i do not hold that against you :) thanks for the window into the mind of the incomprehensible (to me) regular guy from a small town who meets the woman of his dreams.

It is always a good day when you find a new story written by one of the true masters. This was definitely another Five Star submission by one of the best there is.

I am curious. If these last few stories are from the same person that has posted in the past as DGHear did you have a stroke or something? The last few stories seem like they were written by a 12 year old.

but I have to admit that the cool gal with the evil jock, the use of contaminated water for vengeance and the black mailing fat aunt turned down my flame....

in his assessment of HOH,,,TK U MLJ LV NV

A great little story. I always look forward to your work and enjoy it very much.

It was a really good story, old friend. Thank you for all you do.

that he has a child out there being raised by a whore and an asshole.

that was a fine piece of work hope to see more

Love your Ohio settings, keep up the great writing! SEOHIO

As usual, a fine contribution. I enjoyed the water lesson's, excellent research. A fine earth day tale.

Kinda surprised you didn't have a hot tub or a pool used for some 'recreational' activity though.

Well done, a very gentle loving story!

Thank you!

M1

I am happy you wrote another story. thank you

...and well told, but not much in the way of drama or conflict in need of resolution.

You never fail to make me feel good about life, in general, when I read one of your stories. Thanks for being there and please keep writing such wonderful stories. You are truly the best and definitely my most favorite author.

DG you done yourself proud! Man I love this story. I'm watching for more of your storys as you are such a good writer. Thanks for sharing.