All Comments on 'The Waxing Ch. 04'

by thecuriousgeorge

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Slutboy_dkSlutboy_dkabout 9 years ago
Who is Jane?

You have to remember what you call your characters in part 2 John's wife was Susan

and she didn't allow anal play, now you call her Jane and she's able to take 4 fingers anally.

PointWalkerPixPointWalkerPixabout 9 years ago
Highest compliments

sorry that the story ends...

GradStudentGradStudentabout 7 years ago
Excellent story

Please write more.

tralan69ertralan69erover 4 years ago
To be continued?

Sounds like a good idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Confusing going from Susan to Jane. You need to make notes of what you call people, and what they like and do not like. If there a long delay between chapters, re-read them to refresh your memory

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