All Comments on 'The Way of War Pt. 13'

A plot twist, as always. I suspected either Shaun's death and an epilogue, or Shaun's return to battle. This however, is a welcome relief.

I was thrilled to see this listed among the new submissions. Shaun has been roughed up enough. It's good he and Sharon are back at the crater. Do you plan to end it here (I suppose), or let Sharon have some experiences with the new crowd (no leopards, please!)? However, I hope you have more stories to write. I have enjoyed them all!

I am looking forward to read about the changes in the crater, and how Shaun brings it into the 1950s.

Think of Douglas Bader with two prosthetics.