All Comments on 'The Way You Hold Me Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
??????????????????????

why bother here?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
haveny i read this somewhere before...

too much like 'the way you say my name' without being any good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
rushed again

If only there was more editing and grammar check it would be better. The story is too quick and at a fast pace and the chapters too short

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