All Comments on 'The Wedding Dress'

Great story, but i sort of wish the bride didn't join in. Minor quibble for a fantastic story.

Loved the twist at the end. Freaking awesome. Part 2 ?

Wow, this made me so hard reading this, I wish this would have happened on my wedding night, this story needs more parts to carry it on

Love the story great cover by mom lol with the pictures... hope there will be more of Susan and keira

Great story. More of their life together.

Wicked, HOT! Nicely done Sir or Mam.

Excellent story and very fun read for me. Good luck for your next venture.

P.S. : I really don't comment. But my wedding is coming and this story made me hard

First i thought it is rushed in coming right to the bedroom. But it was so intimate and believable between mom and so'n with the right amount of talk and thoughts.

And also a real thriller when Keira woke up gut also before I couldn't stop reading.

What Susan thinks about dirty talk all aspects fit to your story! It is Not alone Hot dirty incest porn as man but it has the Magic of erotism giving a more delicate pleasure reading.

In my thoughts mom wanted to gut fucked also in the brides sexy high heels and was teasing with her bare pussy some more.

He could breed both his Mum and his wife now

WOW!

Amazing loving all your stories

that was a damn cute story...keep up the good wrk...thanx

again a lovely read

Definitely a fantastic story…the mother in the wedding gown would be too much for any horny son…and cumming deep inside mommy as his bride watches…omg..poor wifey..