All Comments on 'The Wedding of the Fashion Dolls'

...ain't it grand to be part of the generation that looked forward to the Laugh-In every Saturday evening? I am loving this, CV, and I'll probably be jittering on broken needles until Part 2 comes along. A very nice blend of drama and humour with not a paragraph out of place. I had one laugh-out-loud moment (something physically difficult with a rolling doughnut) and I liked the imagery of El's shoulder angel and devil. I've said before you'll be an asset to this site and you're doing a great job of proving me right.

Loved it! A beautiful tale. The dentist skit still makes me laugh so hard I can't breathe. Tim Conway was always awesome. Thanks for the memories.

A very good beginning with a good mixture of drama and humor. Some of the acronyms sailed over my head but in no way detracted from the story. A full five stars from me and I look forward to part 2.

bye the end i could not wait for more well done ill be looking for the next chapter be well shayne

Is this story dead?

The story is not dead, but there is A LOT going on in so called "Real Life" that is eating up any opportunity to clean it up/finish it for publication.

Most of the shortcuts or comedian or shows or other real life back in time stuff is hard to get for me as an mid europe native ...... But a lovely story and its time, we sign 2022 aCB, to celebrate LOVE AS LOVE AND NOT AS BIBLE LAW ....... Im not pointing at christians or religious people, im just talking about lOVE pure lOVE and here comes the soulmate and then LOVE is heaven on earth ...... Loosing this soulmate is so powerful to drain all your energy and just an empty being is left ...... Because parts of pur soul and heart are dying too ...... So yes Marji even after 15 years a healing process is hardly happen, more just changing a point of view

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Ugh. Turn it off every once in a while with political/religious comments. Not everything is an existential crisis.

Just comment on the story and characters.

If your belief is that the stories on this site open an avenue to talk about politics and religion - then tolerate all comments even the ones you don't agree with.

I doubt you'll see this, Anonymous, but trying to start a flame war with another commenter, particularly by anonymous heckling, is A Bad Idea. I'll delete any more of it. People have opinions, if you need to address them there are better ways than a comments section.