by sandy_paris
You are forgiven for taking a long time to get this out. It was well worth the wait. Seemed a bit rushed but was wonderfully done. 5*'s
Great family saga.
I have one misgiving, though. Not sure that the different people are well enough developed or differentiated. I mean, there’s lots of members of this family, and they’re all beautiful/gorgeous & they’re all lesbians, so far so good, but I don’t think I really sorted out any differences between them as the narrative rolled on. All the sisters having names starting with “C” didn’t help.
Having said that, it was a good read. As I’ve mentioned before, I’m here for the romance rather than the steamy sex, but that’s just me.
Gosh it seems so long that I've been following this story. It's been a wonderful journey. Am I sad it's over? Yes but I am sure you'll come up with something new but equally good.
Thank you x
This is a beautiful ending to these stories. I've followed from the beginning and enjoyed every one.
Wow, Sandy, it has been quite the tale hasn’t it? I’m sad for the close, but happy with the ending of a truly great set of stories!
Great job Sandy. I enjoyed the series..<even though you killed the originals>.
Looong wait for this ending. I was surprised to see it was only 4 pages long. And then all 3 sisters fall in love…bang bang bang! And they all have kids, of whom I see Hayley and Karen portrayed as reincarnations of the originals. I do like that idea. And a happy ending was had by all…
Fast…very fast…but this has been a very long story and perhaps you have been searching for a way to tie it up and move on to new adventures. And I’m sure you love these characters and wanted to give them happy endings (not to mention some of your readers might’ve had a hissy if any had died, and then you’d feel the need to continue ).
This may sound like complaining, but it’s not. And I could be totally off base. Apologies if so. What I know is that these generations of women were your creations. Their lives were in your hands. And I always want to know where the author sees her creations going. I appreciate the closure, and darned if you didn’t make me cry some happy tears. And sad tears, because it is done. And also I’m sooo jealous that their family wasn’t mine! It’s been a lovely ride. Thank you, and looking forward to the next whenever you’re ready
Thank you to all of you who have commented. It took a long time to get this done and posted. In part, I didn't want it to end, but it had run its course. In the last few months I've been working on something else but recently I've had an idea that I may get on paper at some point involving a couple of these characters.
I was so happy, when I saw a follow up on the series...
It's the series that have touched me the most, lovely and heartgriping all the way through
Thanks, Sandy
Belinda
Pity you made a closure to this lovely extraordinary tale with this last chapter, putting so much into it ….. this whole saga from the start until this last sentence now, was a wonderful love story and im feeling privileged that i was able reading your ART work ….. this was one heaven of love beside the death of the two mums, that hurt, but the rest was recovery and love …… thank you for sharing
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im glad to see your back your story reminds me of the waltons i hope your life is as good Maonaigh loss is sad he was lucky to help and find friends in your little group your tribute and lose shows how you care i look forward to your next story you be well happy and safe a fan shayne
Sandy, it's been worth the wait. I'm glad to see you finish this beautiful story. For me it all began with Millie Scott and I've read everything you've published on Lit. Its been an emotional ride from then until now and I'm sure even more so for you.
Thank you for all of it and anything that might follow.
About a year and a half ago I drifted away from Lit but frequently check in just to see if there is anything new. I was sorry to see that Monarch is no longer around. I appreciated seeing his insightful an encouraging comments he had for you and others. I'm sure he would have left more at this point in time.
I hope you are well, J.
I'm not happy I missed Lit "correcting" my reference to Monaigh. I should have caught it.
A beautiful end to their love story! You have a way with words and crafting a story that is just amazing. Thank-you for sharing your gift!
Beautiful ending to a wonderful series. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.
This is a very neat and satisfying conclusion to your family saga. You were even thoughtful enough to check in on Grace, who was a very minor character. I look forward to new stories from you.
Absolutely fantastic series and so well written and put over. I loved the way each story brought in characters from other parts without straying from that particular part. Brilliant! You write extremely well and there's a lightness to the writing even through the hardest parts of each tale.
I look forward to reading more of your tales in the future. It even looks as if there's a continuation from the last one. You mentioned about the youngsters being close etc!!???
I have said it before but,
Your stories are So So Good!
So well written, great character development and so good to read!
I have just reread your entire catalogue again and if anything enjoyed them more than the first time!
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing writing talent!
Truly looking forward to your future submissions!
Thank you again!
Sandy I owe you an apology. When I first read this I said it felt rushed. Having read it again ( a long with your other wonderful stories ). It does not seem rushed. Not sure why. Thank you for your stories, they are so well done.
I relish the journey that you have taken us on. A wonderful heart felt experience of the power of love, family and human compassion in the face of life events. Also a reminder to cherish those you have and that any family came be made of blood or water if you so desire!