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Lovely

Your first two pieces posted here — “Bad Timing” set — provide a glimpse of your talent as a writer. This piece confirms that talent in a dramatic way. So much pain, so much hope, so much love expressed so vividly in what is really a short story. You created two relatable/real/captivating characters, all the better nameless, immersed in scenes that a reader can feel, taste, smell; some so graphically erotic, others so poignant, some even mundane but so meaningful. Love the closing lines. You cannot read this piece without wanting to read again soon. 5 stars are way insufficient. Hope you continue to share your talent.