by flip_the_script
Talk about suspenseful ending.
Hurry and post chapter 2
We’re on tenterhooks here
One thing I hate is switching tenses. I'm also not keen on first person stories, but the writing quality blew both those dislikes into the weeds! Top notch tale, keep it coming! 5 stars!
Fabulous character development, slow burn, everything I love in a story! Can’t wait to read more of your work!
Incredibly hot.! You express the sexual tension between the two wonderfully. 5 stars
Text could use some proofreading but the story is superb, and hits my two weak spots for (lesbian) incest: tenderness and maturity. I don't even mind the cold-feet ending, the emotional arc is so well-grounded. Will definitely be looking out for your future works!
There better be more parts to this story! It's too well written to just end abruptly! 😡😡😡