All Comments on 'The Weekly Ritual'

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swfb70swfb704 months ago

can't wait to read chapter 2

FeltfixerFeltfixer4 months ago

Talk about suspenseful ending.

Hurry and post chapter 2

We’re on tenterhooks here

namidaboshinamidaboshi4 months ago

Jibbers Crabst! That was hot.

When is the next chapter dropping?

Lone_HawkLone_Hawk4 months ago

whoooooo....... I sure hope that there is more of this story.... wonderful....

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood4 months ago

Looking forward to the next installment. Excellent build up.

Celastrus_orbiculatusCelastrus_orbiculatus4 months ago

suuuper sexy. more More MOAAARRRRRRR

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So well written. Thank you. Waiting patiently for ch. 2.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

One thing I hate is switching tenses. I'm also not keen on first person stories, but the writing quality blew both those dislikes into the weeds! Top notch tale, keep it coming! 5 stars!

BacklightBacklight4 months ago

Fabulous character development, slow burn, everything I love in a story! Can’t wait to read more of your work!

tallman441tallman4414 months ago

Incredibly hot.! You express the sexual tension between the two wonderfully. 5 stars

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar4 months ago

Text could use some proofreading but the story is superb, and hits my two weak spots for (lesbian) incest: tenderness and maturity. I don't even mind the cold-feet ending, the emotional arc is so well-grounded. Will definitely be looking out for your future works!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I will be following this with keen interest!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

There better be more parts to this story! It's too well written to just end abruptly! 😡😡😡

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Beautifully written, do please continue the story 🙏

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