All Comments on 'The Weight of Desire'

some woke incel wrote this shit, apparently. Snoozefest.

I think this story should be read slowly.

I had to reread a few paragraphs to get the mood the author was trying to establish.

Very interesting after the third restart.

The style then becomes interesting. It works if it is part of a story arch where there is progression to more complex interactions or discoveries or perhaps just opening the door to new ways of experiencing intimacy.

This is in the fetish category, but it could easily be romance

with a different approach.

I certainly do not recommend moving from the sublime to the bizarre of the fetish category.

BTW, looks like we have another small-brained right-wing contributor in the anonymous comments. Delete ! :)