by PinkPantheress
Really like the name you chose (Ember). A few minor typos, but overall a great start. I would suggest longer chapters, though, say 2-3 pgs at least. It helps with the flow and since it takes a while to submit a story and get it ok'd, it also helps keep the readers satisfied (if that's even possible). I'm curious about the fire, her lack of changing ability, and now her visions. Fun stuff. Keep up the good work. :)
When I saw that there was no more I was disappointed, more please. I really enjoyed her attitude and her supporting characters (i.e. her mother) and their spark.
What kind of cliffhanger was that!? I need more!!! Please please please !!!!
Please write some more of this I love it and can't believe you haven't finished it
What a let down. It's obvious that there will not be any more chapters added since such a long time has passed. Don't know why there never was a follow up, but very disappointing to say the least, but it only gets two stars as I didn't hate it.