All Comments on 'The Were that Wasn't'

by PinkPantheress

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great start...

Really like the name you chose (Ember). A few minor typos, but overall a great start. I would suggest longer chapters, though, say 2-3 pgs at least. It helps with the flow and since it takes a while to submit a story and get it ok'd, it also helps keep the readers satisfied (if that's even possible). I'm curious about the fire, her lack of changing ability, and now her visions. Fun stuff. Keep up the good work. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome

MORE!!!! Already hooked

copper67copper67over 7 years ago
Excellent Start

I enjoyed your story. Please continue.

openeyeddreamer333openeyeddreamer333over 7 years ago
Amazing

When I saw that there was no more I was disappointed, more please. I really enjoyed her attitude and her supporting characters (i.e. her mother) and their spark.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What the what?!

What kind of cliffhanger was that!? I need more!!! Please please please !!!!

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
More, More, More

Please write some more of this I love it and can't believe you haven't finished it

oldpantythiefoldpantythief4 months ago

What a let down. It's obvious that there will not be any more chapters added since such a long time has passed. Don't know why there never was a follow up, but very disappointing to say the least, but it only gets two stars as I didn't hate it.

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