by River_willow76
Already submitted 5 chapters... just waiting for them to be approved and then posted.
your style of writing is simply marvolous!
i love your story so far and I can't wait for the next ones!
you write so emotionally, i nearly cried.
seriously.
k_k
I'm really glad chapter 2 posted today because I want more....chapter 2 here I come
To an intriguing story. My one complaint is your time line is off. Their daughter is already 5 & they are days away from their 5th Anniversary. They got married 6 months after meeting. Factor in her attack was 6 yrs prior to the present day in the chapter ...its just wonky.
If ya corrected it in following chapters disregard my comment. If ya haven't I'll just mentally change it lol.
~LadySilverNova~
She got pregnant from the attack....the timeline fits....Especially cause he was so excited about her being pregnant with HIS baby.....
Of course let’s have a bitch that don’t believe her kid. She sounds like stuck up POS that will only trust herself. For that this story is unreadable. Don’t care what happened to the mom, child is crying and telling you that car will hurt you, take it serious. Least for the kid’s sake.