All Comments on 'The Werewolf's Sabbat'

by River_willow76

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Jennyt82Jennyt82about 12 years ago
Can't wait for more

Great start. More please.

shamu726shamu726about 12 years ago
great beginning

great start.. hope u post an update soon

River_willow76River_willow76about 12 years agoAuthor

Already submitted 5 chapters... just waiting for them to be approved and then posted.

kitteh_katkitteh_katabout 12 years ago
fabulous darling!

your style of writing is simply marvolous!

i love your story so far and I can't wait for the next ones!

you write so emotionally, i nearly cried.

seriously.

k_k

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Nice Start

I'm really glad chapter 2 posted today because I want more....chapter 2 here I come

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great Start....

To an intriguing story. My one complaint is your time line is off. Their daughter is already 5 & they are days away from their 5th Anniversary. They got married 6 months after meeting. Factor in her attack was 6 yrs prior to the present day in the chapter ...its just wonky.

If ya corrected it in following chapters disregard my comment. If ya haven't I'll just mentally change it lol.

~LadySilverNova~

Tifani40dTifani40dalmost 12 years ago
Maybe....

She got pregnant from the attack....the timeline fits....Especially cause he was so excited about her being pregnant with HIS baby.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Of course let’s have a bitch that don’t believe her kid. She sounds like stuck up POS that will only trust herself. For that this story is unreadable. Don’t care what happened to the mom, child is crying and telling you that car will hurt you, take it serious. Least for the kid’s sake.

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