All Comments on 'The Werewolves of Africville'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Somehow...

Worse than Twilight. At least it was short.

Masterskitten26Masterskitten26over 5 years ago
No meat and bones; you left a lot out. Not worth the read.

So, she is a werewolf that can shift at will. Big deal. She is going to college. Big deal.

So what? You base the story in Canada and a few areas you moved around in.

Still, not interesting.

Werewolves of Africville? Really? Sounds to be like your a bit racist and nothing what so ever came of the title in this story. So what is your point?

Again, it seems you are racist and made the female out to be an easy lay.

There is nothing here that says the story will continue nor get exciting. It's lacking in ALL areas and if this is supposed to be a complete one page story you just had a major fail.

I cannot give this any stars.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...