All Comments on 'The Whipped Heiress Ch. 01'

Great writing! Very hot!

I became extremely wet reading this story. I find stories where people from the wealthy and privileged classes are stripped of their money, their possessions, their clothes and forced to live their life (even for a short time) as a naked sex slave to be utterly captivating. Heather being forced to expose her naked body in public so that even the common people can ogle her nudity is a huge turn-on for me. Forcing her to have sex with working class people and lowly servants would be even better! I'm sure you'll find plenty of ways to degrade and humiliated Heather now that she's a slave in a foreign country!

Excellent writing.

I wonder what you're gonno do to increase the poor girl humiliation because first part was rother hard already.

Cant' waiting to read more of you about her.

Fantastic opener! Put your thinking cap on to make it interesting for the next 59 days! No branding please, nor excessive tattooing. Maybe an acquaintance with electro play & shibari ties would be nice for some variety.....

Very intelligently written. Love the descriptive humiliation although I do prefer the role reversal aspects. Please keep our minds as wet as other parts of our anatomy.

Loving the ontinuing story of Heathers abuse. Fantasy story that is unbelievable but totally erotic and extreemly sexy.

Good story, but I would rather the slave just suffered and did not enjoy some aspects of her status.

The push/pull of Heather being frightened from the depravity and her intense arousal makes the story arousing. Superior writing and the dialogue is excellent. Of course its difficult to build excitement from when she was a fairly normal girl with libidinous secrets

so well written

Hot as hell but sounds like heaven.....

I don't understand why you enjoy it either. You are know where near 60 days !

In your previous story, Heather was 20 yo. Now she suddenly is eighteen.

Although there are more ways to punish a woman then smacking her buttocks it is a hot story.