All Comments on 'The White Room'

Joan -- As I enjoy both erotica and sci fi, this was a real "10" to read. It was very different from your other writings that I've enjoyed, and I shall now check

'em all to sample the variety. Very clever, and if I'm taken for sampling, I hope I may visit your white room.

JayR

That story was very different, You have a very interesting imagination. But I liked it. thank you

A story with a strong start, though the reader should have been given Lisa's name earlier - it did nothing to call her 'The girl'. The surreal set up was intriguing, but poor characterisation began to let it down. I didn't buy Lisa's mood swings and sexual urges despite the ' chemicals in the water' explanation. The story was all over the place. The post script explanation about the aliens/automatons and Lisa / humanities subsequent fate wasn't satisfactory either. The story was original and a good idea, but it also takes characterisation and a well crafted story to make an enjoyable read.

That needs to be answered.

I really enjoyed reading this

I thought this story started well but it could have been much better. By the end the discriptions of sexual encounters turned into simple factual retelling of events and that's where you lost me.

Was really unexpected..... creapy ending

Dear Author, WOW! What a frightening story. Very well done and quite captivating.

Thank you, jntiques/john

You have just crossed over into The Twilight Zone.

You are an excellent writer & I salute your contribution to this place!

Highly different scenario. Not very erotic. Do not understand the purpose of the results of Lisa's impregnation