All Comments on 'The Whore's Daughter Pt. 01'

There's nothing interstitial or hot about this. I wish I hadn't bothered reading it, and I definitely won't be reading the next installment. I'll actually be looking forward to avoiding it.

Not the normal fare which is placed on this site. This is something special and, as a debut story, extraordinary. It's not comfortable reading but it is compelling. I will be looking out for the next chapter

I agree with much of AnnaValley11 has already written. I appreciate your beginning efforts.