All Comments on 'The Widow'

Excellent story, I like all your stories so far. Keep them coming

It's rare at Literotica to get such a complete misogynist sadist as the protagonist of the story and I applaud your courage, but this is too much. To do that to a woman on the very day she's burying her husband? Or even to do it at all?

You could have made it a better story by letting us more into Michelle's head and her thoughts as she's turned from a happy wife and mother of two into a whore at Alfie's beck and call. Maybe she could plan some revenge, or plot an escape? As it stands, though, it's just an exercise in cruelty and as such not very sexy. Sorry.

I am hoping there is a sequel.would love to be apart.

Sorry but to write something like this just tells how sick you must be. I enjoy read stories on here but if they were like this one I would never read another one again. On top of that it is just as sick to think someone act liked these. You really need half as well as anyone who would give you positive feedback

Worst story I have read on this site.

Pays that much for a hooker with two kids and a business to run?

Story has real potential

@ A. "What .... You totally missed the point. Alfie didn't pay anything the 2 guys did. To the contrary, he pocketed a nice arranger fee, got a business and a slave. That Michelle is not only abused but got a serious amount in return is crucial. If You were to strike that $$$ amount out of the story the plot line falls apart. So far the story is short on details about the children. They are only mentioned to illustrate the tight spot Michelle is in. Not being in the scenes they do not subtract from her beauty appeal.

Yes, its not a 'nice' story ... but would object to critiques. _ A_ Do believe that for cruel people the likelihood to be a younger and immature person is indeed higher - similar to crime statistics that show higher percentages for young criminals than old. Only with demographic pyramid currently tilted with absolute number of older boomers there might be a different impression. So this Alfie persona does not seem to be a bad choice as a villain. _B_ Dark erotic fantasies are not for all. But IMHO they are more enjoyable and healthy for our minds if not too realistic, to keep them in the "mindgame box". Thus avoiding the slippery slope downwards towards despicable real crimes. Similarly, in assessing a story better stay clear of any "realistic" criteria/issues. Plot-could-work-at-first-glance is more than enough for me.

Don't hide Your dislike of a genre behind an unfair criticism. Would regret if the author were to be discouraged from writing more. Hello T. Thanks for sharing Your work.

If you liked the story thanks, i appreciate the feedback. If you didn't like the story plot then you probably shouldn't be in the noncon genre. If you didn't like the story due to how it's written thanks for your feedback.

Some nice public humiliation.

Would really love a part 2

Great hot story hope chapter 2 soon