by VictorBlum
The story was well written and the sex was hot. It would have been better if the typos had been caught (She reached up and grabbed my sorts...). Please consider getting an editor.
If I were the son, I wouldn't want to share with a stepbrother. But if I lived out of town I wouldn't care. Great story except for the ending.
I liked the story. Your premise was believable and your build up was nice. Keep up the good work! The only critical thing I might mention is the use of the word 'meaty' when referring to breasts. Not my particular favorite, but certainly not something that kept me from enjoying the story. I love a good 'big titted' mommy story!
I'm going to go out on a limb here: I guess Wes likes BIG TITS! Whadda ya think?
You kept switching relationships so often that it spoiled any continuity. Perhaps you neglected to proof read the story.
this absolutely cries out for a second chapter, or several more chapters. The ending just felt "lazy" and incomplete.
It is easy to criticize an author hiding behind the pseudonym of anonymous.
Have the guts to sign in
I thought this a good read
Well written with pretty good grammar despite a few silly hiccups. Overall, it's a sexy mother-fcuk of a story.
Finding mom making lustful love is start of great events
Fucking her is best event of life for the son.
Terrible. The title was misleading. The widow gets her son? Really? More like son settles for sloppy seconds. Perhaps your projecting after finding your wife railed by some random dick on your marriage bed. Bet he's worth much more than you.
I gave the story a 3.5.
Call me a romantic. But if I'm fucking my beautiful mother, I am not sharing her with anyone. But it seems that mom is a big slut and likes young cock.
If I'm not fucking her then she fuck anyone she wants. But if she is fucking then no....she would belong to me and she would only fuck me.
The mother was nothing, but a sex starved whore.. nothing but pure lust and fucking by all parties involved..yuck, this story did nothing for me. ⭐️