All Comments on 'The Widow's Gift Pt. 02'

Intrigued to read your next chapter pls

Keep them coming. If this was a book, i'd be out buying it. It has the right amount of 'menace' going for it, not too overboard with sex, yet. I can see several directions this story could take, it will be interesting to see the route you follow. Good stuff. 🙂

More easter eggs even do its Christmas

Im oh so intrigued by this story, its so cleverly different, keep it coming.

Nice addition to the story. I’d like to read more of it! Keep up the great work,!!

First two parts were very interesting, eager to see more

Very nice, it's clever, different, and oh so sexy. I'll be looking for the next chapter.

sorry, you lost me.

I’m in, waiting for the next installment!

Well done

Setting up for the conquering. I love it!

I feel like there were several Easter eggs and nods to other writers at the beginning of this chapter, but I only caught the nod to ‘Calving’. Wonderful chapter!

Can't wait for the next chapter 5stars

Very engrossing. I'm going to have step up my game.

@robroy - I'm happy you are enjoying the story. I kind of love Alina.

This is a very full, well-rounded, and well-told story. I love that we discover Alina in layers, like matryoshka dolls. I feel her beauty and deep power. I also feel Levi's hidden power emerging. The story has drawn me in and captured me. Good work.

Well done!

No, No, No...how can "w8tingnow" from eight months ago say that he/she was lost by this chapter??!! The involvement, the promise of a good get-back at the girls...provocative, and yet...smooth and silky...

Alina makes this SSSOOO nice...whatever she is, she is totally desirable and believable...Yummy, just like the creamy pastry she feeds to Levi...

Now, the 3 girls are going to be the receivers of some of this attention...with them focussing BACK on Levi...to their possible horror and disgust??!! I am very interested in Chapter 3 and where they are all going...harem, perhaps?

Five**5**Stars...and more!! 🌠🌠🌠🌠⚗️🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💫💫💫💫💫💥💥💥💥💥🌪️🌪️🌪️🌪️🌪️

This story is getting interesting and I'm curious how this kind of mind control will play out.