All Comments on 'The Widow's Gift Pt. 03'

i want more

Loving this series

Love it!

Loved it

Pretty great! Hope it’a not over.

Thanks for all the encouragement, dearest readers. This chapter ran super long and despite my best efforts in editing and rereading it, more errors than I would like still slipped past my critical eye. If anyone is interested in being a proof reader/beta reader to read advanced chapters (my final draft before at least a week before they get posted) please drop me an email for more info. Otherwise thanks for the kind words and happy reading!

Great story. I love it. H

Can't wait to read more.

Great story and looking forward to how he gets even with the other two protagonists.

Loved it - so looking forward to how the story unfolds - I hope he ends up impregnating them both.

This is so much fun to read, looking forward to more. Kinda hope you're planning something long like the outbreak series.

Can’t wait to read more

Great story , but what about the other 2 tormentors. ?

Fear not, dearest Readers, part four is in the works right now. Stay tuned and happy reading 🙂

that's good news!

Very nice reading. Now we wait for the next chapter.

...Or you can read it right now, I posted it last week. I hope you like it!

I must say, the way you have written Alina really brings her character to life. Well done.

Thoroughly enjoying this series. 5*

Carmen...is a bitch; but does she really deserve to have her whole life completely turned inside out lol ke this? I mean, the complete reshaping of her body like that, along with the mental and emotional changes...seems way too far to carry the "revenge" aspect.

Got 5 Stars...but reservedly...

And, how are you going to treat the two remaining tormenters...are they going to be victims too?? This could result in losing me...

Hi TEXASMADDOG, thanks for your encouraging comments and constructively expressing your concerns for the story thus far. I honestly admit that I lean towards towards the unrealistically extreme 90% percent of the time and that's not necessarily to everyone's taste. That's okay, and I understand that some deeply immersive readers might find it objectionable in a real world context. My humble suggestion is not to treat it as anything but an absurd, unbelievable fantasy. It does not reflect on you as a person or reader in real life to indulge your imagination. No one was hurt in the writing of this story, and no one but yourself is judging you for reading it. I promise you it has a happy horny ending for all the characters involved. Thanks for the feedback!

OMFG, this is my wet dream personified. I love what you did with Carmen.

Really good story

I sometimes feel as though I will never top this story. A lot of thought, research and heart went into it. I am endlessly happy that people continue to enjoy it.

Too much of a good thing can get boring after a while

Totally loving this!!

So happy to have found this author. Totally non PC of course but loving it. Bravo!