All Comments on 'The Window Ch. 01'

by sebekhoteph

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jamaicanpussygaljamaicanpussygalover 19 years ago
LOved it!

Absolutely loved it! It was a very wet memory... Can't wait until the next story cums.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good imagery

Watch Plurals (facial lower lips? - etc.) - it's distracting - otherwise good show

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
SUPERB

Great story,You are great with words,and your description of entering her beautiful spot of heaven.WOW soo great to read a loving story.KEEP writing,look forward to more

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