by 32inch
Oh you big tease, 32inch! A 'two-part story' but the subtitle is "good things come in threes". This is a great story and Christine is a great character, and the world you are building has a ton of potential. I would be seriously disappointed that this story is ended if it weren't for the notes at the beginning of the first chapter indicating that there is much more to come. Can't wait!
Hah, no! This story is not ending anytime soon and the subtitle was the nod to the fact Christine has three apprentices now, the ones who will define the dynamic.
This story is developing nicely. Can't wait to learn who the next apprentice is. All the other surprises are just icing on the cake. Thanks
I think that the "2 part story" is simply because up to now, two parts have been posted here. Unless I am very much mistaken, that count is automatically generated, not something that the author determines. So this could quite easily (albeit with a bit of work for the writer, which isn't me, so no worries there) turn into a fifty part story.
One question. Who's the sheriff? In Chapter one it's Donna Sanders and in chapter two it's Lance Brody. Is one actually a deputy? Or a city police chief and a county sheriff?
Again, I enjoy this story.
A question: what if there was a universe where Magic and Science matured together and even in tune.
Where science is integrated, with magic and technology?
Would you have satellites that pictured the magical energy surrounding the planet? Would you graduate from college with A Bachelors of Magic Degree?
These two stories are really good and well-written. If you ever do write a longer series, or a novella or book, I would definitely read it!
Sheriff Brody looks like he wants to become Christine's lover, friend, for Christine to become his resource in fighting local crimes, and won't take no for an answer. He may be willing to become one of Christine's new apprentices at least on a part time basis.