All Comments on 'The Witches' Communion'

I was hoping there would be more once she was on the altar. Its implied and it would be too much to describe every individual having their turn with Jo, but I feel like that scene could be expanded. well written overall. liked the basement furnace scene

I like your writing and think you have the start of a great story. I'D have liked to see Jo have an orgasm, and more with the altar scene.

I hope there is more to come

"I want mommies" yes, yes that's right.

I love altar sacrifices. I knew where the story was going from early on and as the anticipation grew , I became aroused.