All Comments on 'The Witching Hour Ch. 01'

If this is really your first try at writing, I can't wait to see what you'll be doing this time next year! In the mean time, more, more, more of this story.

first but not last please .like it a lot not sure where its going so pls hurry and get therethanks steve

Great start. Keep it up!

I really enjoyed what I read so far. I can't wait to read the rest of the story, so get writing!

i loved it. cant wait for chapter two.

best blowjob I have read in a long time

Please sir can I have more? Btw I live in Georgia and you are right about June.

That was a very good start, but a little bit short. Cliffhangers notwithstanding, it could have gone a lot further before you published it. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Voted 5/5.

This is an unfinished story, stops part way through. Don’t waste your time…. Like I did.