All Comments on 'The Wolf's Hunt'

Spoilt by all the personal pronouns going astray - Could have been a much better story - especially if you gave it an "end" - Only just worth the 3 stars

You need a good editor, Too many missteps in your writing,makes it hard to follow your story line

I echo the other comments: You need an editor, or at bare minimum a proofreader. You're using incorrect words (for example, I believe you were looking for the word "regimen," not "regiment", pronouns and names jump... You might have had a good story, but those errors kept me from going past the first half of the first page.

It needs to be proof read. He, she, him her are mixed thru ought the story. It's difficult to keep track of who is doing what to who. I gave up reading it. Besides, it wanders off in many directions. Difficult to follow.

Promising but what happened to the roasting meat?