All Comments on 'The Woman Down the Hall'

I love it when a story has a little more than sex going on. Would have liked a little more drama and length, reaction of family, etc, but that's just a personal preference.A solid 5*

This is an adult story written for an adult audience. The dialogue and emotional attachments are so entirely natural and believable. Writing on this level isn't easy to come across.

Thank you,

ansdguy

Seems to me they were in a sexual relationship before being adults, I was under the assumption that wasn't allowed on Lit.

I loved it and how he was visualizing his past with his sister compared to now. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!!

Well written, well paced story of siblings finding love with each other after difficult relationships with other partners. One anon commented 'an adult story for an adult audience' couldn't agree more. Just made a really nice read.

Definitely a 5 star story.

Your writing continues to excel and this story should be continued in some fashion. As no one is perfect, there are a few errors, but the readability is not hurt. Keep writing. Solidly hot!

Very good story line. Might be in need of another chapter, perhaps.

I thought I was reading my fantasy.

Nice

Very sexy story - it's so hard to find mature brother/sister stories, to this was a very hot read. I loved reading about the sounds and smells of sex (I usually include those in my stories as well).