All Comments on 'The Woman in the Elevator Pt. 02'

by evelynarize

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liz33ndliz33ndalmost 7 years ago
Love the idea

GreT story although it lacked in suspension and seduction. Talented writer tho

evelynarizeevelynarizealmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thx

@liz33nd Thanks for the constructive criticism! There is a part 1 if you didn't know - you might find the deviation and suspense there!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Mooore

Please tell me you gonna go further with it and add some dominating

RenataAsheRenataAshealmost 7 years ago
More please

Part 3 soon right...

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