by conanthe
I am expected to read the previous five chapters to make sense of this one. Surely a synopsis would be in order.
1.80 Yep that's an awesome story all right. Only you must think so JT. Score says otherwise.
I had hoped it was done nine years ago, but here it is again still nothing special.
Nine and a half years between chapters and not even a little, "Sorry for the delay"?
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Fuck you.
Thank you!!! Thank you so much!!! I made it half way through the first page and I realized how much I owe you for writing this. I finally managed to fall asleep for the first time in a couple days. Granted drolling on my keyboard wasnt on my bucket list but we cant always get the big win.
Yes I think this is a great story. I even re-read it so I was sure I had the context right. I even had balls enough to put my handle on my comment so folks could know I did it. If you can do better please let us all know where your efforts are posted so we can all check them out. This might not be the stroke story you are looking for so just keep on trolling. JT
Ignore all of the “what have you been doing for 9 years” feedback. I’m looking forward to seeing where you take this. I enjoyed the re-read of the first chapters. Keep it up!
There are so many sectarians and do-gooders that it doesn't matter whether one appears here in lit. But still, I've rarely heard so much idiotic psychological babble. Even if you dress your message in sex, it's no more than idiotic! But I am convinced that you know best yourself!
Nine years and we get a fuckin' two page installment? Waste of time. 1 star. Either put up or shut up.
Good story and enjoyed it glad you added to it and will look forward to more of it.