All Comments on 'The Women Tribe Ch. 01'

Great!

Good story but a HUGE amount of spelling mistakes

You are in bad need of help to put a story where we can read it with out trying to figure out what the hxll is going on.! You need a "PROOF" reader something bad.

Please get a couple as they are on here and would like to help you.^

As already stated you require an editor more than any writer on this site, I'd settle for you using spellcheck

First of thanks guys!

Also thanks for the Constructive criticism tendernsweet2 :)

I guess I really need someone to read it though before I post stuff on here. Will try doing that for the next story. And about guessing, I made it like that for people to use their own fantasy in places, I mean I know how the full story is, and was planning to use some of those things in Ch 2 (if there ever is one). Again thanks!

im sorry but this story really does need proofreading. I struggled to read it through it was so poor. there was no flow with the language and the POV kept changing.. at times i felt like it was put a into b instead of an erotic story.

Who the heck cares about spelling!!! The story is good and I want more to see how the thing ends. Please keep writing and to heck with the spelling.

Spelling and grammar most certainly do matter. There is information regarding proofreaders in the info pages. Give them a shout!

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