All Comments on 'The Work Crew'

Imagination, sensuality and good writing -- what more could you ask for? The author's self-depreciating comments notwithstanding, this was one of the most imaginative and well-written pieces I have read in Literotica.

The use of inner dialogue was a clever piece of craft. The sensuality was direct and grabbed you by the throat -- or rather crotch.

I can't wait to read the other works. Well done, Marcia!

1. Lacey thought of the millions of tiny sperm, awaiting her decision.

2. "Will they all want my ass?" Annie laughed. "Do men want anything else, nowadays?"

Delectable writing! Thanks for a fun read!

I had to give you a 5 on this story. Creative and imaginative and just a good read. Some of the descriptions you used were excellent. "...played finger-tag through her flesh" is damn good line among others. I'm going to add you to my short list of favorites. Keep up the wonderful work.