All Comments on 'The Work-out'

by DarcyLeeds

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More of an Erotic Couplings story than a Romance . . .

. . . unless there's going to be a second chapter with a different vibe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Romance?

I didn't see any romance, just sex. I think this belongs under erotic couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I must have missed the romance. Erotic Couplings is where this belongs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Topic police

Typical topic police. No commentary on the story, just whines about not being in the right place. Nice tight story, could fit a couple categories. But not romance, heavens no. Keep writing.

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