All Comments on 'The Work Trip Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good start. Looking forward to more. Nice to see you back, always quite liked the “Unexpected Bet” story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very hot

Been on some business trips but none went like this. Ready for part 2

WarningU2WarningU2over 3 years ago
Well Written and Believable

Thank you for a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice

My girlfriend and I are currently having similar conversations. I can’t wait for part 2

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

Good story it looks like the friend is going to get the honeymoon before the boyfriend even ask her. A 4 from me.

TGun3112TGun3112over 3 years ago
Glad your writing again

Good story! Looking forward to next chapter. Would love to know more about Becca, a very interesting carecter. Keep up the good work.

WordSculptorWordSculptorover 3 years ago

Very fun. Looking forward to more :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Interesting premise

But the sex, when it finally happened was too fast.

How about some foreplay?

How about some teasing of his cock -- in his pants and then out of it?

Did she like his cock? What about it? Was it fatter than her boyfriend's? Longer? Harder? Circumcised? Was her boyfriend circumcised?

How about him needing to see her naked body, and some initial reluctance.

How about some playing with her breasts and nipples. First by her, then by him.

How about some dialog about how she was going to blow him. How did he like it?

How did he imagine she would do it? Did he like a lot of tongue action? Sis he like his balls played with? Did she play with them? How?

How about her having him tell her when he was close to cumming so she could slow down and make it last?

Did she want to do it again?

So much opportunity.

Disappointing.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 3 years ago

Very interesting premise, Brad might regret pushing Mina to do this. Looks like she is having fun. Interested to see where it goes. On a side note I could have had this from a stranger on a work trip once, she wanted some cream for her breasts, sadly I had an appointment to keep.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I don’t like cheating even if it’s preplaned & authorized. I’d drop him like a burning coal.

Bill S.

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