All Comments on 'The Work Wife Pt. 01'

Fantastic work! Really hot and very well written. I feel like the poetic, almost snapshot lines really lend in setting the tone of their mutual seduction.

So erotic. So poetic. So truthful. And yet. If you could only, perhaps, edit? Because then it would be good. So good.

I love the original style of your story, and the tension as it builds. We've all been there, it seems, with a coworker on a trip, and neither one of us willing to make the first, totally inappropriate, move. Good for her for having made the move. I suspect she knew it would be welcome. Body language, and all that. 5* ~~ JB Edwards