All Comments on 'The World is My Oyster: Tutorial'

You need to continue the story it was so good. For your first effort it was really amazing! Keep up the great writing and write more on this site!!!

You write better than most and it's a fun idea. I hope to see it continue.

A recommendation: always post under the category that will be the biggest problem if folks don't realize that the content is contained in the story. In a less wordy way, I'd have put this under incest/taboo, because not everyone bothers to read the tags and they'll yell at you for their unpleasant surprise. Fair? No. But the way it goes.

I definitely like where this is going! Keep at it, and I will be here for every chapter

Outstanding first chapter, and I think it's placed perfectly in the Mind Control category.

Cool concept. Finally a good "mind control" story with a female lead.

This is cool!

You need to give us more. This is fantastic!!!