by greenday0418
Not much of a romance. No sympathetic characters. If this was in EC it would be a 5 but as is 2 stars
Why is this in "romance" instead of where it belongs, "cheating sluts"... I mean "loving wives"? My only question is, is there anyone in this so called story who is NOT a cheating piece of shit with the morals of a poorly behaved snake? They never mentioned Claude's cheating, and although I got the vibes she likely may have, I don't think the young dick's mother was explicitly mentioned as having cheated, just being shit mother (which is honestly even worse). Oh and Eric seems like a stand up character, too bad he failed to instill any morals or ethics into this "main character", but then you can't teach a coocoo bird to be caring and warm and honest.
No likeable characters. Mrs. Mallory and his Dad especially. Your surprise ending ruined the story. You were obviously more interested in creating a surprise than you were with writing a good story. Won't fall for this again. Unfollowed
Well that was a hot mess. Melia fucks the son of the man she was cheating with for some time before her husband died, and who I'd in a relationship with her daughter, and yeah doesn't want the father to know because she was cheating on him with his son. Is that about right? Icky. How is this Romance?
Jason's mother and father were bastards!!!
STORY IS UTTER TRASH, NOT EVEN CLOSE TO ROMANCE!!
NOT WORTH READING