All Comments on 'The World Reborn Ch. 02'

by SexyKthulhu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I thought you were doing a great job. So just keep the chapters coming.

masteraaronh74masteraaronh74over 4 years ago
Keep up the good work

Don't worry about tome we can wait. As the story goes just let it flow.

KellvallonKellvallonover 4 years ago
Great Job

Keep up the good work. I really enjoy reading peoples versions of postapocolypgic worlds. I cant help but wonder if there are remnants of the virus left. If there are, will it effect our soul survivor?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Doing good so far.

Can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent

Just the right mix of sex, story and world building. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice fic!

This is an interesting story! I like the descriptions of the mutants--inhuman enough to be fascinating, but normal enough to still be attractive.

I hope you provide some sort of translation in the next chapter though... guessing at what they're saying is hard, although you do a fair job of conveying general meaning and intent through your writing even if we can't really follow the conversation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome

I'm loving the story so far. Just make sure to keep the relationship with kheeta special and it will make the stories amazing.

Can't wait for the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great story

when can you post the next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Can we have a translation at the end of each chapter for what they say? Kinda hard to follow the conversation honestly... Love the story just would like to be able to understand it more.

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