All Comments on 'The World Rewritten'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow

Simply great, 5 stars fur sure!

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 6 years agoAuthor

Many thanks! I'm so happy someone has commented... :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I only found this story because it popped up in the 'recent comments' sidebar.

I'm very glad it did, this was a fantastically sexy little tale.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 6 years agoAuthor

Thank you for reading - and for commenting. :-)

Glad you enjoyed it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I'll be honest, I did not expect this to be Alice in Wonderland when I began.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 6 years agoAuthor

Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wonderfully Debauched

Great story, a clear case of be careful what you wish for.

Thanks for sharing.

AlinaXAlinaXabout 5 years agoAuthor

Indeed... Happy you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting!

BelleDeVilleneuveBelleDeVilleneuveover 2 years ago

I went looking for debauchery and have finally found the queen! This is bloody brilliant, and I kinda want to live here. I also want to know what happens with the baby! Five stars and new favorite writer.

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

lol - I suspect she's pregnant forever... or the aliens return after a while and abduct her.

489518489518about 2 years ago

The perfect blend of perversion, imagination, and horror.

I would love a sequel! :)

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