by XicotencatlSmith
You should mention the "seventeen year-old garage" at least seventeen times.
No six-pack? Where's the coon dog! I laughed so hard.
the way you wrapped everything up in one story was fantastic! To make it worse, can you try to add a bit of submission/domination and maybe blackmail to the next chapter? Also, you missed the anal virgin aspect....
holy shit this is the funniest story i've ever read! i love teh babysitter turning 18 the second he pulled into the 17 yr old garage! so hilarious!